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CorDharel
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Posted - 2005/01/21 : 20:57:09
After I showed my friend my new track "Love And Hhc" he said its the best song I have ever made. I know it's still bad and when I listen to tracks at morecore.net I feel sad and stupid that I can't do happyhardcore songs like there are... :'-(
Anyway, if you want to hear a track from me, CorDharel, you can download the new track I made. Sadly I don't have a super female chorus singer, I just got myself. But you can laugh. I am to depressed to get angry. :(
http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-LoveAndHappyHardcore.mp3 If you want you can give me some feedback like always. You can also say that I suck cause I think so. ------------------ I love Happy Hardcore! But lots of people don't understand it... I feel sorry for them that they miss best music genre in da world.
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Charco
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Posted - 2005/01/21 : 21:08:56
It's a lot better than everything i've done!!
Have you thought about tweaking the vocals??
I like the tune...Think the vocals are a bit off-putting though....
But you've got the guts to do somethin like that...an if this is your first attempt at a tune with vocals....very well done!!!
Just try messin with the vocals...
Very good effort by all means.
...but hey...thats just my opinion... 
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2005/01/21 : 22:41:43
Interesting. I'll have to say you gave it a good go. I can tell by listening to this you know hardcore. But to be 100% honest the vocals are really bad : / The Track idea I do like but the vocals just throw it off. Good kick and bassline. If you wantto make this any good. Get rid of the vocals and work on the synths and the total sound. Really good shot to dude. Pratice pratice pratice.
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Soxio
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Posted - 2005/01/21 : 22:48:20
i have to admit i know nothin about dj'n but... the beat to me was good but the vocals dont mix with it at all sorry man.. Least you had guts to try!! 
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bemaniraver
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Posted - 2005/01/21 : 23:17:41
i love it!
the vocals are great i think..at least the lyrics, they are cheesy :D~ . the singing could use some work, but i think you have a great accent.
great work!
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GeminiJ
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Posted - 2005/01/22 : 00:12:09
same here, it's very good, I keep playing it over, lol.
Great Work
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2005/01/22 : 00:38:55
well i just had another listen and for come reason it seemd better. I like the beat you have going and the bassline is cool. You changed my mind good work :)
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2005/01/22 : 16:34:12
Wow I didnt expect such a feedback. Thank you ver much!
Yes the vocals are special... but at least I got rid of the noise on the recordings. in my first songs I had much noise cause I took the normal record application from windows. Now I use a better program.
Your answers really help me. I like the song, too, and I also think thats the best ive ever made. But I like all my songs cause I produce them as long as I like them, thats why I need others opinion.
@mustapha I heard your song called "Playtime" and I like it! Its a very complicated song - in a positive way. Did you produce it with Fruityloops? And btw your vocals are also very funny :D
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Charco
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Posted - 2005/01/22 : 16:41:14
Glad you like it...one of my personal favs haha, a lot of work went into it...I didn't use Fruity Loops....It was somethin A LOT cheaper... 
..I just made the most of what I had at the time....EJay haha!!
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Go Here: http://www.ionosphere.co.uk or here: http://www.sbthq.net . Happy? You should be!! And of course: My tunes: http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=230636&T=6580
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2005/01/22 : 16:45:43
Perhaps I should explain the vocals. I talk about a love story, a girl wants to be together with a man, but he lives for other things, not love for women. He lives for happy hardcore, for parties and for having fun in life. But he loves her! He would never create a family and have kids, but she wants to. So she tries and tries to get him, but he always has to say "I can never stand still, if you leave me" like "I don't care if you leave me or not - I will continue my life as it was before".
Then "It is not the thrill that I can hurt you" means that the girl thinks that he plays with her, cause sometimes he says he loves her, and sometimes he doesnt. So she thinks he wants to hurt her. "Cause I really love you and I want to give up, everything that I need so much, but its not possible" - He loves her, and he would love to be her boyfriend, but he can't leave his old live.
But he doesnt want her to hurt herself, cause she would do everything to get his love. He wants her to understand, and she should "let him be like he wants to be", and if she thinks his way of life is not acceptable for her, she should "leave him, forget everything that she know and experienced. Because their worlds are not the same...
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DJ Mole
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Posted - 2005/01/22 : 16:48:37
yeah tuen rocks, but the vocals suck beef, you sound like a death metal singer mate LMAO!
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2005/01/22 : 17:11:52
Oh and by the way, if you want to listen to something funny, then listen to my first version of the vocals :D there I sing in a normal way, not so deep.
http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-LoveAndHhcWierdVocalsVersion.mp3 So you see, I tried a lot to get the vocals as good as I can ;) ------------------ I love Happy Hardcore! But lots of people don't understand it... I feel sorry for them that they miss best music genre in da world.
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DJ Mole
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Posted - 2005/01/22 : 17:48:03
quote: Originally posted by CorDharel:
Oh and by the way, if you want to listen to something funny, then listen to my first version of the vocals :D there I sing in a normal way, not so deep.
http://cordharel.bachi.net/sound/CorDharel-LoveAndHhcWierdVocalsVersion.mp3 So you see, I tried a lot to get the vocals as good as I can ;) ------------------ I love Happy Hardcore! But lots of people don't understand it... I feel sorry for them that they miss best music genre in da world.
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2005/01/22 : 19:15:38
LMFAO, britney spears step aside!
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/01/22 : 20:03:12
Your explanation of the words is normal for anyone who has a passion in life.
It's sad to say but many women love a man for how much they can 'improve' him.
Not for what he is.
As for your tune, try making the hihats etc brighter, timestreach the vocals and add
a few effects to them. That would transform it completely.
You've got to start somewhere. Keep at it.
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CorDharel
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Posted - 2005/01/23 : 12:20:21
I totally agree with your opinion about women and men. I experienced this with a girlfriend I almost had. But she wanted me to change but I love my life as it is :)
What do you mean with "timestreach"? Do you mean a hall effect?
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