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Brooky90
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2013/11/29 : 16:58:47
Hi all, i've just finished a new track i been working on, its a UK Hardcore remix of DJ Fresh - Hot Right Now, can someone please tell me what they think, give some feedback or whatever, im trying to learn and i really need people to help me lol thanks guys.
https://soundcloud.com/brookyofficial
(And if anyone wants to know i use Cubase 5)
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Colombia
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Posted - 2013/11/29 : 20:02:41
Arrangement is alright and I like the dnb bit that winds down and kicks into uk hardcore mode, too. Overall, the track feels like it just needs some more "flesh". Maybe add some rizers/sweeps to build up/drop? And perhaps a little more variation with the percussion so it doesn't feel so flat all the way through.
Better use of vocals this time around
...and I also use Cubase 5.
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AceofSpades_Lorenzo
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Posted - 2013/11/29 : 20:41:18
my advice
add a sine wave layer to the bass. it's lacking low end
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Brooky90
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Posted - 2013/11/29 : 21:19:31
Wow thanks guys, i know what you mean though about the percussion, just not sure how to put more variety into it, every track i do i always seem 2 just make a basic loop of 4/4 kick, the same hi-hat and 9 times out of 10 the same snare, its almost like a habit that i do now lol, not really sure what to do to make it different :/
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DJ_FunDaBounce
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Posted - 2013/11/30 : 01:06:39
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Originally posted by Brooky90:
Wow thanks guys, i know what you mean though about the percussion, just not sure how to put more variety into it, every track i do i always seem 2 just make a basic loop of 4/4 kick, the same hi-hat and 9 times out of 10 the same snare, its almost like a habit that i do now lol, not really sure what to do to make it different :/
I noticed you used snare fills in some parts. I suggest doing the opposite: try muting notes in the sequencer. Like, for example, the last kick in a 16 bar sequence. This gives it some tension/release, as well.
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