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ozmium
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 Posted - 2009/07/27 : 20:02:03
okay just give it a listen i brought somthing in after every 8 bars and i put filters and loops it has a good melody
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Edited by - ozmium on 2009/07/28 19:36:00 |
Meathead
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Posted - 2009/07/27 : 20:11:34
Link?
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frozt
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Posted - 2009/07/27 : 20:45:39
Would definitely listen if there was a link
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ozmium
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Posted - 2009/07/28 : 17:53:46
lol wow XD okay got to stop the drugs lol heres the link
http://www.4shared.com/file/121061935/44a6b69c/Rave_paradice.html
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Posted - 2009/07/28 : 19:21:02
BUMP 
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HardcoreHarryUK
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Posted - 2009/07/28 : 19:39:58
hi there..
not the most keen on that to be honest..
the sounds im not into.. the melody aint that catchy/musical
not sure what happens at 2:12 but it goes very quiet when u bring in that b-line..
nice idea.. but needs to be a cleaner sweep down..
love the kick drum though.. nice and reverby and BIG
so good skills.
keep it up
peace
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Rayovac
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Posted - 2009/07/28 : 19:49:12
- The mastering could be better i.e. at the beginning when you run that EQ effect on the synth. At one point it also gets fairly quiet.
- You have too much of the same synth going on. If you ask me they're clashing.
- There's no lower-end bass anywhere in the song. You also have the off-beat synth but there's no bass to go with it.
- It's too repetitive. To be honest it seems to be either just the kick with percussion, or the kick w/ percussion and synths. The melody is a bit repetitive too.
- Also, to get some caviling in, it's a bit short, and it should be paradise.
These are just my opinions though... I'm no expert either... so ignore them if you want.
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acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2009/07/28 : 20:01:48
well its better, but i could just write the same advice as i have done for your other tracks
ps. mind if i remix a midi of this? :P
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Mortis
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Posted - 2009/07/28 : 20:09:39
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Originally posted by acidfluxxbass:
ps. mind if i remix a midi of this? :P
I'd be interested in checking out the midi too.
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Meathead
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Posted - 2009/07/28 : 20:11:12
quote:
Originally posted by Rayovac:
- The mastering could be better i.e. at the beginning when you run that EQ effect on the synth. At one point it also gets fairly quiet.
- You have too much of the same synth going on. If you ask me they're clashing.
- There's no lower-end bass anywhere in the song. You also have the off-beat synth but there's no bass to go with it.
- It's too repetitive. To be honest it seems to be either just the kick with percussion, or the kick w/ percussion and synths. The melody is a bit repetitive too.
- Also, to get some caviling in, it's a bit short, and it should be paradise.
These are just my opinions though... I'm no expert either... so ignore them if you want.
Spot on imo.
Also, no real structure; no intro, outro and at 0:51 the track comes in out of nowhere. Random FX, such as the filter at 1:40, thrown in in odd places, same goes for the vocal samples just seemingly scattered about.
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Originally posted by ozmium:
lol wow XD okay got to stop the drugs lol heres the link
Yes, yes you do. You don't by any chance produce under the influence do you?
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Edited by - Meathead on 2009/07/28 20:12:01 |
ozmium
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 Posted - 2009/07/28 : 20:56:35
nah i dont produce under the influence XD
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ozmium
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Posted - 2009/07/28 : 21:01:08
heres the flp i dident make it a zip cuz i forgot and it was too late to go back so heres the flp with the midi
http://www.4shared.com/file/121328128/2303313c/Rave_paradice.html
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ozmium
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 Posted - 2009/07/28 : 21:02:17
ps. have fun!
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Mortis
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Posted - 2009/07/29 : 12:49:24
I had a little play around with this track last night and got some interesting results. It's not mixed down or mastered or even eq'd in anyway. It's just a small clip: http://www21.zippyshare.com/v/44492161/file.html
**Edit**
A bit more I've just done: http://www8.zippyshare.com/v/99512660/file.html
Again ignore the poor sounds and lack of build-ups etc.
I might just finish this track.
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Edited by - Mortis on 2009/07/29 15:52:26 |
acidfluxxbass
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Posted - 2009/07/29 : 13:14:29
quote:
Originally posted by Mortis:
I had a little play around with this track last night and got some interesting results. It's not mixed down or mastered or even eq'd in anyway. It's just a small clip: http://www21.zippyshare.com/v/44492161/file.html
damn, Mortis! haha i was thinking along those lines!
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ozmium
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Posted - 2009/07/29 : 18:52:36
quote:
Originally posted by Mortis:
I had a little play around with this track last night and got some interesting results. It's not mixed down or mastered or even eq'd in anyway. It's just a small clip: http://www21.zippyshare.com/v/44492161/file.html
**Edit**
A bit more I've just done: http://www8.zippyshare.com/v/99512660/file.html
Again ignore the poor sounds and lack of build-ups etc.
I might just finish this track.
holy crap i wish i was that good at making tunes XD
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