Author |
Thread |
|
tru bass
Advanced Member
United Kingdom
1,996 posts Joined: Jul, 2006
|
Posted - 2009/05/13 : 18:38:52
yeah ive posted up the original trance version of this on my "free trance track" thread and thought it would be worth posting up the new improved hardcore version!!
Hardcore with trancey vibes and a
http://www.4shared.com/file/105144845/3a0d19f5/Gay_electro_man_2_hardcore.html All feedback welcome! p.s Caution, may contain donk
__________________________________
http://soundcloud.com/shrubman
Alert moderator
|
Audio Warfare
Advanced Member
United Kingdom
3,047 posts Joined: Mar, 2009
|
Posted - 2009/05/14 : 10:24:18
Nice little track here man. Few mixdown issues mainly the kick doesn't have enough low end and the riff seems to be short on low mid - mid. I'd change the kick and get another layer in that lead. Just don't make it muddy! Don't forget to put some layers on different octaves if you're not doing that already.
I'm not entirely sold on the breakdowns though. If it was me I would re-think these.
You also need some sort of a vocal hook in their IMO. Just makes it more recognisable. Even if it’s just one or two words used cleverly.
__________________________________
Listen to released and forthcoming Audio Warfare/Audio Weaponry tunes here:-
http://soundcloud.com/audio-warfare
Alert moderator
|
protonic
Senior Member
Hungary
297 posts Joined: Sep, 2005
|
Posted - 2009/05/14 : 16:05:23
Nice one! Thanks for shareing
__________________________________
http://www.myspace.com/protonichardcore
Alert moderator
|
DreamX
New Member
Hungary
21 posts Joined: Aug, 2008
|
Posted - 2009/05/14 : 17:59:53
Nice track ! I like it :)
__________________________________
http://www.freetraxrecords.co.nr/ http://www.myspace.com/xequ
Alert moderator
|