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atomsk
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 Posted - 2009/02/25 :  18:56:18
  
 
        
not sure if anyone here has heard some terrorcore song, but i like them so i got really really bored today after a good slasher and made this..... 
i am a noob at this so dont kill me, this is my 3rd song i have done ever 
my mastering and compression suck, cuz of the bass 
i hope it sounds good-ish on your speakers (only have headphones atm) 
the start is kinda load so dont get to loud 
constitutive chritsam(cant spell) plz 
thanks 
 
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http://www16.zippyshare.com/v/16996270/file.html    sendspace (full download-highest bitrate)  http://www.sendspace.com/file/znss1t    btw the bpm is 215      edit: i put this in the wrong dicussion, mods plz move
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choonland
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		 Posted - 2009/02/25 :  19:10:09
  
  
  
 
cool, its the first time i see a terrorcore track posted here 
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sounds decent to me, the atmosphere in the breakdown sounds interesting, has that darkish and tetric feeling. 
... mmm I dont know so much about terror so i dont know what else to say 
maybe add more screams and crazy noizes? 
 
 
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atomsk
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		 Posted - 2009/02/25 :  20:18:54
  
  
  
 
thanks ^_^ 
 
i think i will work on a long and better sound verson of this song tho 
 
i have more screams from a movie soo i think ill try a version 2 =]
 
 
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Jay-Owen
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		 Posted - 2009/02/25 :  20:34:38
  
  
  
 
It needs work, but considering that this is only your 3rd, I'd say ****ing nice job. Keep it going!
 
 
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atomsk
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		 Posted - 2009/02/25 :  20:35:31
  
  
  
 
quote: Originally posted by Jay-Owen: 
It needs work, but considering that this is only your 3rd, I'd say ****ing nice job. Keep it going! 
   
 
thank you  
what do you think would make it better? 
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atomsk
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		 Posted - 2009/02/25 :  21:59:53
  
  
  
 
anymore constitutive chritsam?
 
 
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		 Posted - 2009/02/25 :  22:07:37
  
  
  
 
its criticism to help you wif your spelling :) 
 
anyway.. sounds well good fella ;)  as already said might add some more 'help im beeing brutally raped' screaming in over the first 30 seconds till the melody comes then fade the screams out or so :) 
 
as for how it ends atm.. i would leave it like this.. then go for a full blast melody + kicks (the ones u used before) just like that.. no intro on it or w/e :)  
 
a well.. enjoy!! post a full scale version once ya done (if ya like)
 
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atomsk
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		 Posted - 2009/02/25 :  23:05:03
  
  
  
 
lol i know my spelling is atrocious sorry xD 
 
i do have a really fu** up screaming scene from the same movie, it was epic 
 
yes ill post a longer, better mixed version soon... not sure when been haveing music block >_< 
 
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		 Posted - 2009/02/26 :  00:31:30
  
  
  
 
quote: [b]better mixed version soon 
   
 
 
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		 Posted - 2009/02/26 :  00:40:59
  
  
  
 
quote: Originally posted by acidfluxxbass: 
quote: [b]better mixed version soon 
   
 
 
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huh? 
 
i mean the bass fu**s up the song kinda 
thats what i ment by "better mixed" 
idk xD
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		 Posted - 2009/02/26 :  01:32:27
  
  
  
 
hate writers blocks xD try listening to some hardcore radio or so.. well terror in ur case :p might give ya some ideas =]
 
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