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SERA
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 Posted - 2006/01/27 : 20:49:11
http://www.xtarsia.com/music/XtarsiA%20-%20Daybreak.mp3
well... i payed attention to the begining... and then skimped on the end lol
(i got carried away just listening to the mellody ..as you do!)
any suggestions, critisicm ect all welcome :D
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Lynny
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Posted - 2006/01/27 : 21:02:42
It's the 4th time that i'm listening to your tune now, and i like it more and more! There are some parts and effects that i prefer particularly, for example that rattling, cattering and the low piano with its rhythm and of course the melody.
This tune is relaxing and uplifting at the same time! 
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mnmcandiez
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Posted - 2006/01/27 : 22:07:20
not bad
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Leto
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 Posted - 2006/01/27 : 23:13:29
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Originally posted by SERA:
http://www.xtarsia.com/music/XtarsiA%20-%20Daybreak.mp3
well... i payed attention to the begining... and then skimped on the end lol
(i got carried away just listening to the mellody ..as you do!)
any suggestions, critisicm ect all welcome :D
The melody is quite nice, but the underlying piano that transitions to the second melody needs changes. It sounds a little flat. I particularly like the last melody though.
In terms of "skimping" it sounds fine. It is just what it needed. A more simple beat and bass line.
I like it.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/01/28 : 08:06:31
Nice I like it
Quote DJleto the underlying piano that transitions to the second melody needs changes. It sounds a little flat. I particularly like the last melody though. end Quote
Not a finished tune but a great start for one its Very happy
The percussion structure is a bit disjointed less is more try not having so many kickdrum rolls it throws the flow of the tune out.
Limit them to say 16 or 32 bars or when you lead into a break or change.
Another one I would like to get my hands on to do a remix
the other one is still in production but is sounding nice
keep up the good work
Cheers Brett IONOSPHERE
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Sir Feli
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Posted - 2006/01/28 : 17:34:04
i like it gd job
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/01/29 : 00:35:25
yeh, what Brett said.
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ihaveduff
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Posted - 2006/01/29 : 09:51:35
i'm liking this one
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SERA
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 Posted - 2006/01/29 : 13:37:07
 Well given the possative remarks... i probably ought to get of my arse and finish it off!
yes....percussion.... its always the last thing i do, and pay the least attention to aswell....
i ought to change that habit.
thnx guys and gal!
i'll see what i can do about that piano too (i never was fully satisfied with it)
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DJEvolution
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Posted - 2006/01/29 : 20:19:43
i liky!! keep up the great work !
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take away...
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2006/02/01 : 14:24:41
Yes like it, good work mate.
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