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GaryMaguireXL
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Posted - 2006/01/20 : 16:15:56
hey peeps finished this awhile ago and had it on this computer so decided to throw it up on the net.
Let us know what ya Think
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http://homepage.eircom.net/~hillstreetm/MoreBeatzPlease1.mp3 all the Best XL
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mark-ireland
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Posted - 2006/01/20 : 16:42:15
Nice build up to the piano.
Goes a bit too quite around the 26 seconds mark. Would sound better if there was more going on in it. Would aslo like to hear the piano part stretched out a bit more instead of it kicking in real quick and kicking back out real quick.
Great production, only thing wrong with it is the strucure imo.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2006/01/20 : 19:30:11
Good stuff likin it : )
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GaryMaguireXL
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Posted - 2006/01/20 : 21:38:48
cheers guys ;)
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T~
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Posted - 2006/01/20 : 23:30:02
i agree with what mark-ireland said, apart form that its a good track
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The Deviant
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Posted - 2006/01/21 : 00:08:04
Not as good as some of your previous stuff. I don't think the arp cuts it as the lead, It needs a melody either over the top or to replace it when the main part kicks in.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2006/01/21 : 13:19:25
Hey Gary, yeh I like it and also agree with the comments by mark_ireland and The Deviant.
So, imo, maximise it's full potential,
before you let it be.
Something like this - http://www.ionosphere.co.uk/AUDIO/XLvsIonosphere-LetItBe.mp3
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GaryMaguireXL
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Posted - 2006/01/22 : 19:51:20
cheers peeps
It twas an idea that sprung to mind.:)
Thanks for tha feedback
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