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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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 Australia
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Posted - 2005/12/20 : 13:04:29
okay so its my first song with full vocals that ive kept and that fit (mostly) so if you could listen to the WHOLE song (its only 2 and a half minutes) and give me some feedback i will love you all forever, im always open to all suggestions and most of the time actually do change my songs depending on what people say on here...so....fire away....please
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=393322 its called 'Love'
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DJDURSTAN
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Posted - 2005/12/20 : 14:32:32
Not bad mate. During the breakdown the vocals go way out of time (not sure if it's on purpose) and could really do with being brought in tight to the rhythm. Apart from that its a great tune. Sounds like a really bad acid trip which i wasn't expecting as it's called love.
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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 Australia
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Posted - 2005/12/20 : 15:26:40
its called love coz of lack of a better name... and i dont have a timestretching program anymore so im basically using what i can but obviously half-way through the vocal part it goes out of time, and then back to perfect time;... dunno how that works... should get a timestretching program...
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