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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Australia
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 Posted - 2005/11/01 : 16:16:31
okay so i took a lot of peoples advice and updated serious drugs with a lot of pads to thicken it out a bit and i think it worked out well. Also theres a new song up - get down. If your gonna give advice listen to the whole song, otherwise id appreciate ANY feedback. Cheers
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Fishy
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Posted - 2005/11/01 : 16:20:33
Good!! but very unoriginal title! and angels eyes vocals dont fit at all!:S please remove it!
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Ionosphere
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/11/01 : 17:39:19
'Get Down' - yeh, I see what dassfisken means about the vocals and they're out of key (out of tune with the rest of the track).
'Serious Drugs' - again, there's some stuff in there that's out of key although the dominant 'riff', changing from major to minor,
not unlike a couple of bulby g's tunes, is cool.
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bulby_g
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/11/01 : 17:51:25
Good track but you should play around with the bass a bit, listen closely to a few hardcore tunes the have the kind of bass your trying to get and try to get as near to it as possible.
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MaGiC_MuShRooM
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Australia
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Posted - 2005/11/01 : 18:05:24
i got rid of the vocals... they were there just coz i couldnt think of anything to fill in the gap... but angel eyes is gone from there. Also bulby what do you mean with the bass?
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NeXuS
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United States
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Posted - 2005/11/01 : 18:45:21
Not really diggin the main climaxes, seems really plain and doesnt go anywhere.
Also the vocal when you have it go "le-le-le-le-lets all-all-all-all"
sounds very jumbled and too close together.
Try getting rid of some inbetween and match them with the beat.
Maybe have 2 prepeats per beat?
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