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SERA
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 Posted - 2005/10/25 : 22:36:03
http://www.xtarsia.com/music/Smiling%20Soul.mp3
has had input from a guy called tim.
and Lots of work gone into this.. its not finished yet.. still somethings im not happy about.. but, i have to wait till i get my new comp before i can carry on.
any and all feedback welcome!
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Edited by - SERA on 2005/10/26 17:31:14 |
Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/10/25 : 23:17:47
A lot of work has obviously gone into this, impressive but, imo, it needs more of an 'edge'.
Maybe a more aggresive Kick and/or Bass, not so 'rounded', and harder sharper Claps and Hats so that it really does kick arse.
A vast improvement on your last tune and very nice melodies.
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THIS - http://soundcloud.com/ionosphere
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/10/25 : 23:29:19
Good work on this mate really love the harder section, think Ionosphere has covered everything.
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/10/26 : 00:14:30
Really like that harder section as well.
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SERA
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Posted - 2005/10/26 : 17:54:54
all noted - cheers guys! now i gotta wait for my new comp. i can work on individual bits.. but it wont play back the whole song to me.. so i have to render bits each time to hear them 
the middle bit has had tims influence. everything done entirely in fruity still 
it seems the better i get.. the more i see i have to learn - i guess it will never end lol
the stuff i wasent happy with is the "blurryness" of the happy parts i think a little mor eq'ing can fix that though (i hope). but hard to do when u cant listen and adjust realtime...
i'll post up the final version when its finally done!
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Blue Frequency
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United States
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Posted - 2005/10/26 : 18:04:17
quote:
it seems the better i get.. the more i see i have to learn - i guess it will never end lol
very true.
it sounds nice. love the hard section. it "kicks ass". 
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Lynny
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Posted - 2005/10/26 : 18:24:20
This tune became my fav of yours! In short, loller:D
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