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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 04:50:00
Hey, just workin on a few new tracks, and was after some feedback, none of em are finished.
You can download em here:
http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/scr8tch/index.html Theres only 3 so far ........Juss Passn By ; )........
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 21:15:15
All three are good but in need of 'the magic ingredient' to make them stand out.
Vocals or ??? something......
The second one has the most potential, really good.
imo, develop the piano riff and make it a bit quieter in the mix.
Supplement it with some pads or vocals or both and you've got a winner.
Keep us posted.
Between the Earth and the Stars.
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Needforspeed
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 22:55:09
this is good music. it sounds like the hardcore from 2001-2003...you could try make them sound more fresh but thats your desition:)
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mj-dream
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Posted - 2005/05/27 : 23:17:49
aahhhh nice one scr8tch u along with bulby g and gaz xl are three of my favourites at minuite your all full of enthusiasm and ideas and i think its fantastic mate keep at it for sure:)
mj-dream remember the name im here for fame
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/05/28 : 02:05:32
Thanx guys for the feedback n encouragement 
Yeah, Ill definately get to addn vocals, I just found an awesome female vocalist which happened to be a friend of my cousin, She has a voice similar to Norah Jones.
However Im a slow worker, especially with the stuff where theres potential in.
I agree with you Ionosphere on the 2nd one actually, its the only one that i can really stand repetitive listening without getting tired haha.
Thanx a many MJ, definately made my day mate 
Will keep youse posted even if it takes a while lol.
Cheerz
........Juss Passn By ; )........
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/05/28 : 02:17:52
.....also, everything that mj said aswell.
Between the Earth and the Stars.
Website - http://www.ionosphere.co.uk
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/05/28 : 09:05:50
Cheerz Yo!
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/05/30 : 03:51:36
Hey got a new one up and im thinking of keeping this for my future demo cd, lemme know if you guys agree, i tend to get carried away with my own stuff lol.
http://www.happyhardcore.com/forums/topic.asp?TOPIC_ID=21386 Latest--> http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/scr8tch/latest.html ........Juss Passn By ; )........
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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/30 : 08:19:50
hey i liked 1 and 3. basically for one you just need to add variety and introduce much more stuff. and also i believe that everyone has used that vanguard present. even tho i love it. ( on track 1) you need to know what your gonna do with your tracks basically all these tracks i just see you working on melodys and thats it. you should take a lil from each track and make one out of it.
track 2 , no comment really just 2 fast 4 me.
track 3, i thought this one was gonna be the best as it started i liked the vibe it was giving me. but once again it needs more. you should make 1 track out of 1 and 3 and i think u got a good track.
as for the lastest link it doesnt work.
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eLASTIC
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Posted - 2005/05/30 : 10:11:19
Thanx for the feedback dude, you can try this link:
http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/scr8tch/latest.html or the full edit can be found at: http://www.sectionz.com/detail.asp?rtype=mp3&SZID=19420 Latest--> http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/scr8tch/latest.html ........Juss Passn By ; )........
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