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icex
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 Posted - 2005/05/15 : 22:03:49
lemme know what u think about my song. basically i made 90% of it.
worth a listen trust me
http://www.soundclick.com/util/Streamm3u.m3u?ID=2427957&q=hi
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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/15 : 22:24:44
and if possible could i have someone upload it onto a server so everyone doesnt have to sign up?
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milo
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Posted - 2005/05/16 : 01:57:46
you don't need to sign up to make it work i'm finding...
main thing that jumps out at me is turn the rap down a lot or turn everything else up. also bring your drums to the "front", make them the loudest since they should be driving it. you should also implement a break down much earlier on. the other thing is the rap and break sound good together, take that idea and run with it
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HappyHardcore.com/North American Hardcore Movement/Totally Sweet Radio/Nuistic
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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/16 : 05:53:22
yo milo do u think its good enouf to be released? can someone tell me wassup with the copyrights is it possible to release a track like this period?
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milo
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Posted - 2005/05/16 : 06:23:37
needs more work as far as fullness, structure, and polishing. it isn't hard to write a lead and drop some drums under it, but it's the real attention to details that really make it complete
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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/16 : 06:26:23
i just have no idea what else i can do.
i am gonna make the first part of the break a lil louder, and add an outro.
i guess i might add some more studder fx and maybe some more hidden fx.
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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/16 : 17:19:28
anyone else?
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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/16 : 22:14:03
bump
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/05/16 : 22:18:11
Just takin me to the soundclick homepage?
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=322316&T=8358
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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/16 : 22:23:36
try this
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/clubstyleusamusic.htm
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/05/16 : 22:40:38
Like the main melody and the dnb break :) Would maybe drop the looped sound that starts from the very beginning as it doesn't seem to match the rest of the songs style. Could maybe ling the dnb break with a bit of a build up as it jumps in a bit quick to the track, I felt as though the acid line should be more progressive get high early on and go a bit mad with it, drums do def need to go up or vice versa as milo said and I would have the bass a bit more aggressive but that’s just how I like my bass. Overall quite a good track that could be a really good track with a bit of work.
Ps. you only have to sign in if you try to listen to the mp3.
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=322316&T=8358
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icex
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 Posted - 2005/05/16 : 22:47:19
thx best review so far :)
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bulby_g
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 Posted - 2005/05/16 : 22:50:18
No probs
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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/17 : 18:04:29
bump
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icex
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Posted - 2005/05/18 : 07:26:14
can i get some mo reviews
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