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icex
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Posted - 2005/03/17 : 21:52:26
GO HERE ITS CALLED NINTENDO
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mj-dream
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Posted - 2005/03/17 : 22:07:00
not bad at all mate.....tuffer kik wud a bin betta tho.
really like it mate
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icex
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Posted - 2005/03/18 : 00:45:44
thx for the reply
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Charco
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Posted - 2005/03/18 : 01:19:32
Like the boucey feel to the start of this!! 
Maybe have the volume of the scratchy effects a bit lower?
Love the breakdown into the Nintendo tune haha, but whats with the brief silence? Nice idea with the nintendo sample but it didn't do much for the tune, It lasted a bit long without any background samples.. (IMO.)
Like the happy flow it has towards the end (Just after the nintendo part).
Very nice effort but some tweaking required...
Only my opinion though!! 
Good work. Keep it up!
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icex
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Posted - 2005/03/18 : 03:27:22
the silence i did because i didnt want a version of my song on the internet. its a sample!
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icex
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Posted - 2005/03/21 : 23:38:55
bump
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Sean Apollo
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Posted - 2005/03/21 : 23:43:24
The hi-hats sounds off beat at times. Good attempt mate. Cool idea with the mario theme.
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zelachang
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Posted - 2005/03/22 : 06:34:01
felt a bit *empty* at times... more mids? more stuff going on? oh but what do I know, I just play the music :)
I liked it though, with some work it should turn out great
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icex
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Posted - 2005/03/22 : 08:03:24
thx for the feedback ill check the hi hats again maybe its off on some bars
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The Deviant
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Posted - 2005/03/22 : 10:01:28
That take's me back to being a kid and play super mario bro's.
It's allright, Harder kick is needed as has been said. It would be nice to have something different after the break, a new main part. and have what you have now as the intro. But do you want it to be more serious? I think it's fine as a fun track.
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milo
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Posted - 2005/03/22 : 16:57:47
make your synths quieter, let the drums lead the track more, they'll help make the track feel more 'full'
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icex
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Posted - 2005/03/22 : 19:35:29
no i dont think i want to leave it like this forever, but for now im gona throw it into my folder of tracks to be made better in the future.
thx for all the replys.
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/03/26 : 05:01:55
Everything that everyone has already said but it would have been great if it ripped back in with some serious drumming over that poxy 'Mario' tune.
Then rubbed salt into the wound with a screaming acid riff or two.
It's a nice bouncy little track, reminicent of a fairground but nicely original.
Cool.
PS. Didn't reply to this earlier 'cos...I hadn't formed a valid opinion. If in doubt, leave it out.
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Edited by - Ionosphere on 2005/03/27 14:04:33 |