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Trancentral
Junior Member
Netherlands
92 posts
Joined: Mar, 2002
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 Posted - 2005/01/31 : 10:50:46
Hi :D Well here it is ; a happy hardcore song like in the good old days.
Note that the notes aren't 100% perfect but im working on it :)
I'm also trying to write some lyrics for this song , which will maybe be included in a later version.
Any comments would be appriciated :)
http://members.home.nl/tr4ncy/trancentral_-_wonderland_forever_(v1_1).mp3
*Edit newer version :D *
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Gabba_Fan_Andy
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United Kingdom
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Joined: Jan, 2005
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 Posted - 2005/01/31 : 11:44:59
Hey gud tune, its sounds kinda cheesy at da beginning but once da beat kicks in its kinda cool, not 2 sure about da strings/harmonics doe, they sound kinda awkard if u know wot i mean, they don't flow wiv da song, dats my opinion as a non-professional and as a listener of hardcore, let me no bout any improvements to this song or any nu songs, just pm me! 
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Sk8SiM
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United Kingdom
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 Posted - 2005/01/31 : 12:03:26
wow! Wikid tune man... I Love it! :D
What samples/vst's (if used) you using :)
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zippy
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/01/31 : 13:22:58
a really like it mate.....but am afraid am with andy on the whole flowing with the song thing....all the individual parts are great...but when u listen something doesnt quite seem to fit.
hope this is seen as constructive critisism coz a really quite like it!!
good work
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Trancentral
Junior Member
Netherlands
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 Posted - 2005/02/02 : 18:27:52
Thanks for the replys :)
Yeah i know its not 100% but i quite like it :) to answer the question ; no vst's where used. I made it all in Reason.
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Sean Apollo
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United States
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Posted - 2005/02/02 : 20:00:09
Pretty good. Like the old skool feel.
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Trancentral
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Netherlands
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Posted - 2005/02/05 : 18:40:03
Bump , updated the song :) Comments are very welcome :D
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bulby_g
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United Kingdom
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Posted - 2005/02/05 : 18:46:09
Nice track good piono work in the middle wasn't expecting that hit of acid as well twas a nice surprise :)
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=322316&T=8358
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Squishy Star
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United States
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Posted - 2005/02/05 : 18:47:07
sounds good but yeah you could work on making everything flow together
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Splix
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Australia
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Posted - 2005/02/08 : 13:40:05
Downloading...
Listening...
Ok i like the sound of it :)
Try some automation like filtering stuff etc to smoothen out the stuff going into each other (the flow of it)
its pretty random atm. Well.... It just needs some work on the flow. etc. listen to other peoples stuff, and watch how they blend stuff in. It should help to look at other sources/music.
Does 4 me.
Anyhoo good luck with it. Sounds promissing. old skool :P
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