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bulby_g
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 Posted - 2005/01/26 : 21:33:47
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=322316&T=3813
Please advise on how I could improve it!?
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Edited by - bulby_g on 2005/01/26 22:41:04 |
mj-dream
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 Posted - 2005/01/26 : 23:06:12
****in hell bulby g i like that tune am adding u to my favourite artist list on acid planet check my stuff out if you want www.acidplanet.com/artist.pid=332354&t=4391 tell me if l;ink dnt work i would say in my opinion only fing that needs changing is maybe a bit of arrangement an filter fx cnt really say owt else cos its all good if u ask me
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/01/26 : 23:21:03
Agree with mj-. Arrangement don't flow enough. Would prefer the wolf to echo more and
what about some pads, strings or something to fatten it up after the breaks?
Like it though.
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/01/26 : 23:29:37
Cool glad you like I will take that into account and post it once i've worked on it for a bit what do you mean by wolf though? And the arrangement is it mainly the drums and stuff or do you mean like the breaks or even like the whole track?
mj-dream i'll give your stuff a listen tomorrow and tell you what I think need to get to sleep now or i'll never get up for work.
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mj-dream
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Posted - 2005/01/26 : 23:36:01
yes cool.well i mean the whole track too many quick changes like ionasphere says it needs to flow more but again uv deffinately hit the rite spots
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Ionosphere
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Posted - 2005/01/27 : 00:29:43
The Wolf. At the end of the build-up, before it bangs back in you've got a Howl, or that's what it sounds like. BIG IT UP! Make it sound like it's echoing across mountains & valleys.
The Arrangement? The tune starts to get going & then loses momentum, then it's off again,
then loses it again etc. Once it's kickin' make it kick some more, then more. Then drop it
into a break.
You've got the making of something really good there. Don't stand on it's neck.
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Posted - 2005/01/27 : 21:44:06
MJ I listened to your tracks there is some good stuff there especially liked N-JOY.
What plugins would people recomend all I have is some freebie synth im looking too buy a load but don't know what to spend on?
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Posted - 2005/01/27 : 23:58:09
Good tune. For some reason it does not reallyseem "hardcore" tho. It seems like really fast trance. If you givethis a think bassline and some stronger synths it could be a really good one. Not ba d at all tho man! :)
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Posted - 2005/01/28 : 01:56:09
Agree with ionosphere. Biuld up the sets after the breaks and dont loose the momentum. Try and add a couple extra synths to make a corus line to go behind the main one (doesnt even have to be a synth). Just biuld and make it flow. But sounds good man, you really got somthin there!
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Posted - 2005/01/28 : 03:05:52
I'm not a pro like other people around here, so I can't help you with on what to improve, but I have to say I really enjoyed it.
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Posted - 2005/01/28 : 03:30:44
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Originally posted by DJApollo:
Good tune. For some reason it does not reallyseem "hardcore" tho. It seems like really fast trance. If you givethis a think bassline and some stronger synths it could be a really good one. Not ba d at all tho man! :)
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I pretty much agree with him. :P
It has potential! :)
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/01/28 : 18:53:52
Ok cool cheers thanks for all the help i'll try and "hardcore up" the synths and bass a bit and i've started working on arrangement already but i'll post my results when i've changed it round a bit.
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Posted - 2005/02/07 : 20:31:18
We're still waitin!
Had to rumage through the old posts to find this.
Really want to hear what you've done to it.
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Posted - 2005/02/07 : 20:45:22
YEA thanks ionoshpere haha.
I still wanna hear this one too, comeone bulby!
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bulby_g
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Posted - 2005/02/07 : 21:26:29
Yeah sorry i've pulled it off for the time being im kinda strugling to pull this track away from having such a trancey feel to it it's just not working really but if I succeed I will post it. I am working on another hardcore tune as well that i'll post soon as for some feedback.
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=322316&T=8358
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Posted - 2005/02/07 : 21:55:22
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Originally posted by bulby_g:
Yeah sorry i've pulled it off for the time being im kinda strugling to pull this track away from having such a trancey feel to it it's just not working really but if I succeed I will post it. I am working on another hardcore tune as well that i'll post soon as for some feedback.
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?songs=322316&T=8358
I wouldn't mind hearing the original to this (as I missed it!), I'll give you my honest feedback aswell if you want.
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